Question
Please could you suggest a title, comments and critique welcome, thanks?
First Love, he called on her in sleep, fled Heavens gate to find a way,
Answer
Cass, keep the corn line just as you wrote it, the other suggestions sound stupid. As for a title, A line from an old Frank Sinatra song rings a bell, quotSomething in the Nightquot. Keep going, the Queen will be looking to have you to tea!brbrVery nice though. Even for an old broken down exbiker like myself, it brought about the misty eye syndrome. Now I know why I dont spend much time in the poetry section. Take care, Ciao!brbrAn additional No extra charge! bit of info. Very nice sidewinder, but quotForever Youngquot is a trademarked song title. Good thought, though. You got my up thumb.
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